... 8Watts on a spot of 0.1mm diameter arent enough for bare metal - either paint it black and 'etch' the surface while evaporating the paint, or combine three of this diodes to get enough energy density.
The 40 Watt bar-diode sounds like enough power -- but even with a special focussing methode with 19 fibers attached to every of the emitters and bundled to a 0.7mm diameter output (this is the common methode for this type to get them into a fiber) it's not enough power to harm metal - for engraving it's even weaker than the 8Watt-diode, because 40Watts on 0.7mm is much, much lesser energy density than 8Watts on 0.1mm!
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